wow didn't expect that blew me away with how engaging the story was, the opening doesn't fluff around and catches straight to the catch which I thought was cool. looking forward to catching up
Nr_Yet1208
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LIKEthe character didn't have much to them I feel, but mind you I've only just started so I'll update my review as i read more
Nr_Yet1208:four stars for? was something wrong? grammar, plot holes? I mean, im open to criticism, so feel free to say what's on your mind
inklingparker:the character didn't have much to them I feel, but mind you I've only just started so I'll update my review as i read more
Nr_Yet1208:thanks for reading. I'll think about it. I think the first chapter could be made better too.