Review Detail of TungstenCube in Pantheon Online

Very high-quality webnovel, one of three that i have actually enjoyed. The writing quality for Webnovels has always been a make-or-break deal for me, and Anti-hero does pretty well. There are some grammar issues and areas where it seems like he had difficulty articulating the meaning, but I suffer from these problem as well and get stuck on them, spending half an hour fixing it. It’s a perfectly fine trade-off. The story is good, with actual stakes and several real threats. Most of the characters are quite well-developed, with the only exception, in my opinion, being Aeri. She has no real reason to hate Exile. The relevance of a reward from a single quest isn’t worth everything she continually sacrifices in order to minorly inconvenience Exile. Moreover, Kaleidoscope managed to beat Camelot in Mayhem, but seems to be worse than a guild founded by a single pro and some amateurs. How does a pro team lose to a single pro and a bunch of amateurs? Overall, I’d rate it a four and half stars. If you made some edits and fixed a few issues, its easily of publishable quality.