the past participle of lie is lain, so it’s fine. both work.

that’s certainly interesting. i doubt it, though; consider unconsensual impregnation.

It should be ‘DP’, not mana, no?

Cool start

Ascenturi is a pretty unqieu character. I hope more world development is done, and I liked the action. I think ‘Abnormal’ might actually be a really high tier, because his intelligence assessment didn’t change despite increasing.

This is the only novel on this site or any other, including Webnovel, that is of publishable quality. The quality of writing, such as descriptions and grammar, is easily the best there is on this site. Chapters are short, but two are uploaded a day; basically one chapter a day. The characters are absurdly well-written, from the MC to the side-characters to the cannon fodder. The only exception is Nephis, who is seemingly deliberately written to be a very bland and stereotypical protagonist, providing stark contrast to Sunny’s incredible character. The character development is also incredible, with Sunny at the start of the novel being a selfish person and, as of the Antarctica arc, has saved upwards of hundreds of thousands of people in the Chain of Nightmares. The action is wonderfully written, the humor expertly executed and the pacing good but slow. The world building is immaculate, the novel in its entirety simply a masterpiece. I cannot praise this novel enough.

bro forgot his own book, lmao. Aina went through some surgery or some crap and lost her memories and had to redevelop her personality. This objectively happened, I don’t know why your lying about it. I dropped the book a while ago due to the poor power scaling, but this crap makes me not want to pick it back up at all.

mistake

Go read some crappy webnovel like Vampire system or whatever if you want an MC that isn’t an actual person.

With how poorly your grammar is, I perfectly understand your feelings. It’s effortless to see how a child would read this and feel this way.

This novel is a masterpiece. It is only novel here that is on par with a published novel. The few flaws with Free Fall are not present in Shadow Slave, although Free Fall reminded me of a published novel moreso than SS Truly, you have made a work of art, Guilty. The writing quality is superb; fights are masterfully written, with no trouble understanding what is happening. I can effortlessly picture the world that Sunny lives in. Two chapters a day, with next to no grammatical or story-related errors is absurd. The characters are incredible. Every one of them feels like a real person. Sunny clearly has an issue with understanding his own strength, and with how well it is written it legitimately seems intended. Usually, i have a hard time telling whether the flaws in a character are deliberate or side-effects of sloppy writing. Nephis takes on the personality of a stereotypical and relatively bland MC, while Sunny feels like a real person. I enjoy the presence of every character, even the “bad” or “annoying” ones. The story and world building are simply incredible. I don’t know what else to say. I cannot praise them enough.

Very high-quality webnovel, one of three that i have actually enjoyed. The writing quality for Webnovels has always been a make-or-break deal for me, and Anti-hero does pretty well. There are some grammar issues and areas where it seems like he had difficulty articulating the meaning, but I suffer from these problem as well and get stuck on them, spending half an hour fixing it. It’s a perfectly fine trade-off. The story is good, with actual stakes and several real threats. Most of the characters are quite well-developed, with the only exception, in my opinion, being Aeri. She has no real reason to hate Exile. The relevance of a reward from a single quest isn’t worth everything she continually sacrifices in order to minorly inconvenience Exile. Moreover, Kaleidoscope managed to beat Camelot in Mayhem, but seems to be worse than a guild founded by a single pro and some amateurs. How does a pro team lose to a single pro and a bunch of amateurs? Overall, I’d rate it a four and half stars. If you made some edits and fixed a few issues, its easily of publishable quality.