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Great story so far! The middle of this segment seemed to drag a bit, but was still enjoyable. I felt there were a few spots that kinda' jumped . For instance, where did the dark dragon come from, all of a sudden! Perhaps because of the format, too much time lapses and chapters needed to be repeated. And the story line is so exciting, I can't let chapters build up!
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hi dear. There were dragons to begin with since Evie's fam, the Ylvia's are the dragon guardians. As to the appearance of the dragons, I think we've seen it coming, as they head to the Forbidden Land.Even at the time Gav took Evie there,the Princess was already aware of their existence(coz of her father).But to see an actual one has always been a dream for her. Gav and his men have fought with dragons too. Where the dark dragon came from, its origins and everything we want to know, will all be explained, I feel as we go along the way on this journey. Let us know what you think too in the comments section and so we can share thoughts and exchange ideas. đ
Perhaps you skipped a chapter. My app skipped one the other day and I felt lost after a few paragraphs into the next chapter. Then I swiped the side chapter list and noticed there was a chapter that was not unlocked. Dragons have been talked about many times throughout the book since they reached Dacria.