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Great story so far! The middle of this segment seemed to drag a bit, but was still enjoyable. I felt there were a few spots that kinda' jumped . For instance, where did the dark dragon come from, all of a sudden! Perhaps because of the format, too much time lapses and chapters needed to be repeated. And the story line is so exciting, I can't let chapters build up!
I read at night. And I have fallen to sleep crying. Keeping quiet as to not wake my husband. And they are tears that have opened my eyes to all the "little things" we have lost, taken for granted. This story is very well developed. Ms. Joseph has written with sincerity, giving much thought to each character. The reader can draw a parallel between the Anima and the world today. War....injustice.... revenge...trust, but also desire...sacrifice... faithfulness...dedication and devotion. Surroundings are written with few details, so as not to bore the reader. More effort is in character development. The reader can "feel" the characters emotions. See expressions. Visualize faces and figures. I would definitely suggest this story to my friends (maybe not the prudish). The intimate scenes are tastefully written. Just enough detail. Not too explicit. The only thing I wish I could change about the story, either make the chapters a bit longer or release them more often. I have lost a bit of detail from waiting so long. Enjoy!