This is a Great Story. The characters have depth. Even Evin's father and the voice seemed to have a white lining about them. The characters are not shown completely black and white. World background is created with great understanding by mentioning history of 'why the things are happening'. The grammar is on point. Best of luck author. It can a gem for people who likes reading stories with mystery as I could find myself wishing to know what gonna happen? what's that voice?
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