Review Detail of NotBeatrix in Death, Devotion, Dissonance

Wow, really interesting read! The story has a really cool concept and super interesting premise! The writing is also good, and the details help to build the scene and the character dialouge as well, are more than good! There are few grammatical errors and sometimes confusing sentence structure, but other than that, this was really interesting and super well edited! I recommend this story to readers looking to dive into a mysterious interesting world the author has set up! Keep up the good work author, :)!