Review Detail of Syal in Flame of Power

Very good. I read a couple chapters in one go. I really got absorbed by the story. The plot is interesting. The love story from the start is beautiful and can grab the attention of every type of reader. Also, it was a good way to introduce the premise in general and also expose a lot of the world-building. The narrative is very good to read. The author describes in detail the scenes and knows how to put emotional weight when it is needed. I should just point that sometimes the paragraphs get too long, so it may be something to look up to. In general, it's a great novel and I am looking forward to reading more! :3