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YOURS_TRULY
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it's a basic cliche story about going back in time for revenge, unfortunately the character don't have any defining features. they all act at the whim of the almighty author, people comment how the MC did "X" act or thought "y" thought and the author jumps to correct it in the latter chapters, this diminishes the origin of the characters and their motives especially for the MC. which drops the quality of the story. The story development also lacks because of this, there is no realistic way to make a story progresses without it feeling shallow with bad characters. good luck in your future endeavours author and I wish you the best of luck.

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