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YOURS_TRULY

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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
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    barley coherent English . xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
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    Madness Apostle
    Fantasy · Bruhdamante
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Posted

    very nice _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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    Reverend Ecstasy
    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Commented
    Ch 16 Dog Eat Dog
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    Reverend Ecstasy
    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Posted

    aha author could u please slow down with the over explanation, it feels like your characters talk a lot without saying anything meaningful. i couldn't read most of the stuff without skimming through it. good luck and i hope u improve!

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    Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
    Fantasy · Grayback
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Commented

    didn't expect to find something like this in webnovel fanfic, truly great work. kudos, author.

    Ch 10 The Holy Trials 10
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    A Gamer's Guide To Crusading
    Anime & Comics · TheHiddenSword
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Replied to Soni_97

    hey man, your grammar needs serious work. you might want to check out one of those websites that correct spelling and grammar mistakes (like grammarlly or somthing) good luck

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    Emperor Systems
    Eastern · Soni_97
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Posted

    A story with a very good premise and character's, but there is no world building and character introduction. the world and it's characters are dumped at you from the start with no care for the pacing of the story, and the power imbalance is a major issue ##spoiler## The MC at rank 1 can sense when his father peek's at him when he's rank 8?? And MC getting immortal rank enemies when he's rank 1???### so it's a good story that's needs more fleshing out for the world and character's. good luck with your work author!!

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    Iron Blood
    Fantasy · Thieving
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Posted

    it's a basic cliche story about going back in time for revenge, unfortunately the character don't have any defining features. they all act at the whim of the almighty author, people comment how the MC did "X" act or thought "y" thought and the author jumps to correct it in the latter chapters, this diminishes the origin of the characters and their motives especially for the MC. which drops the quality of the story. The story development also lacks because of this, there is no realistic way to make a story progresses without it feeling shallow with bad characters. good luck in your future endeavours author and I wish you the best of luck.

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    My Faᵵe System
    Fantasy · MellowGuy
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Posted

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    Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack
    Anime & Comics · FanficMortal
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Posted

    unfortunately the author didn't do his research before writing this ff, there's a huge plot hole in his story. his MC walk's two paths the Magus path and knight path, btw knight path is supposed to promote to something like branded Knight, so if u are a mage u can't become branded knight.the same applies if u are a warlock u can't become a regular Magus. so how tf is something so basic ignored.

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    WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION
    Anime & Comics · Keetarp
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Replied to freakofntur

    are u guys stupid didn't he Saint knight would need the energy that he gets when he kills, it's a hopeless path for anyone else.

    " I can use this to further strengthen Fallen Star Pendant, this bloodline that carries a trace of the ancient creature's aura, adding on with some Bloodline crystals it will make an amazing item, they could aid in the modification of the Fallen Star Pendant…"" Leylin looked at the test tube. He will not mind using some Bloodline crystals to enhance his weapon, because it is also a part of his strength.
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    WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION
    Anime & Comics · Keetarp
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Posted

    would like to read it, unfortunately there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors that I couldn't finish the first chapter. I would recommend the author to use something like grammarly to fix his mistakes. hope u the best of luck.

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    Magus of Darkness
    Fantasy · Kerrim
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Replied to ElitePanther45

    wouldn't a person affinity determine their power what if he picked some trash c grade how would that help him. it would really be disappointing if everyone he knows or choose has some great affinity.

    Ch 20 Bold Idea
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    Fallen Lightbringers' Return
    Fantasy · Hyowha
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter, was wondering will there be any major changes to the story?

    Ch 10 Plans Are Called Plans Because They Work
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    Rebirth of a Broken Demoness
    Fantasy · Hyowha
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Posted

    if u are into characters,world building, ideological clashes then u must read this. I read this before being rewritten, and it's truly one of the best novels in this site ( I would argue that's it's the best purely from the writing style,but unfortunately webnovel doesn't reward good quality novels). good luck with your novel hyowha.

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    Rebirth of a Broken Demoness
    Fantasy · Hyowha
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY2yr
    Posted

    great story with a interesting mc. the first 700 Ch or so we're one of the best volume's, seriously like I was on the edge thinking oh will he succeed or fail. but unfortunately after that the MC became a marry sue, everything he needs comes to him. and there was a clear divide between enemy and friends, not how it used to be with mixed fri-emy. I'd say read it it's great but after he gets his ** (around ch700-800) decide for yourself. unfortunately I've dropped it.

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    Birth of the Demonic Sword
    Eastern · Eveofchaos
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  • YOURS_TRULY
    YOURS_TRULY3yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. Was wondering why does the style of writing feel very different from I am a demoness?

    Ch 11 Strength
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    Fallen Lightbringers' Return
    Fantasy · Hyowha
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