The story is a little slow, and the descriptions are somewhat lacking, BUT, for a first novel this is great! The writing is amazing with almost no errors, and it's fluent and smooth to read. The story does feel slow, but with some tweaking could be really good. I'm excited to see this author grow. Good luck! [img=recommend]
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