HAHA! PB-Lead-PB-Lead. I was hooked after that. The little details are what show a book's true worth, and this author definitely put the time in, to make this book amazing. Thanks for the great read!

If you take the time to actually read this novel, you won't be disappointed. It has the charm necessary to be lighthearted, but isn't overly dramatic like other novels. Solid piece, thanks!

Spot on! The writing is smooth, and vivid descriptions + world building make this a pleasure to read. I can't wait to see how the plot develops, I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. keep up the great work Author!

Can't wait to see where this novel goes. The writing is fairly good, with few grammatical or spelling errors. Great effort. Thanks Author!!!

They say don't judge a book by its cover. YOU SHOULD DO IT FOR THIS ONE! The book is as amazing as the cover. I read until I ran out of book. A+ highly recommend.

The story is a little slow, and the descriptions are somewhat lacking, BUT, for a first novel this is great! The writing is amazing with almost no errors, and it's fluent and smooth to read. The story does feel slow, but with some tweaking could be really good. I'm excited to see this author grow. Good luck! [img=recommend]

Well written and vivid descriptions of all characters and scenes. The author clearly put in the time to craft a quality piece of writing. Great Job!

The story is well written, and I can tell that with a few more updates, will become an amazing novel. The plot is somewhat cliche, but the author makes it their own, and I kept reading. Good Job!

HAHA! The story may have started a little slow and confusing. But I read just a little longer and was pleasantly surprised. The punchiness, humor, and action mixed together make this a great novel. It is honestly succeeds at swaying your emotions and reactions, which I cannot say for many novels. Keep up the stupendous writing!!!!

Thanks!

keep reading ;)

You'll be waiting along with me. I'm still thinking about how to slaughter him.

I don't generally love romance novels, however, this one in particular stands out. It is not only well written, but gets the blood boiling. I really got attached to the main character. I love the parallels between each of the 'villains' too.

Yep, I have been tinkering with the first 5-10 chapter. Those were the first I ever wrote. I also introduce the fallen elf species later on. I'm not sure if those have been created elsewhere, but they exist.... Anyways, thanks for a critical review!

What a pleasure to read. I generally find romance novels slow, but this one incorporates some action and excitement, to liven the story. The grammar is great, and the chapters are nice and long. Keep up the good work!

WOW! Thanks for the amazing review!

Thanks!

This is an amazing novel! I honestly have no qualms with it. Each character is well written and the story slowly forms in my head. Despite this, the plot isn't slow, in fact it is perfectly suspenseful, which keeps you wanting more. This is the creativity that an award winning book should have!