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Review Detail of Valixiant in Dimensional Store System In Apocalypse

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Valixiant
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Story for the first eleven chapters was pretty good. Minor grammatical errors aside, it was pretty solid. Story immediately fell off after chapter 12. Main character is revealed to be a busybody that will endanger his own life for someone he has never met before. Main character can literally practice martial arts and cultivate, but instead he gets into random street fights with gangsters while simping over some random girl. Before that fight happened, he paid for multiple meals of a girl from his class, costing a lot of his money. I find it astounding considering she probably makes more than he does. Also, I'm getting sick and tired of the love at first sight cliche, it's such a lazy way of having romance. World background is decent, nothing terrible, but nothing good either. I can't remember if they introduced the country or not. Overall, it was going good, but it's readily apparently the main character is not going to have any intelligence throughout the novel, and is going to kill himself trying to get a harem as fast as possible.

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