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Review Detail of Valixiant in The Rise of Quetzalcoatl

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Alright, this reminds me of Death by a Thousand Cuts. This novel doesn't have many things that are overly negative, and nothing overly positive. The problem lies in the fact that theres a lot of small plot holes and inconsistences. First off, the plot. Main character receives a system, decides to train in a dungeon before taking revenge. Gets overpowered very quickly, with her emotional state being somewhat unstable. Fairly basic. However, theres so many minor inconsistences, it's ridiculous. The various laws that are talked about aren't very realistic. Prices are even less realistic, and characters reactions are downright unbelievable. Main character goes to a clothing store, employee disdains her, and upon realizing she spent $300 on some baggy sports clothe sets, they suddenly become super respectful? They also start stuttering and becoming nervous as if shes apart of a super big family? As for the characters? Eh. Main character gets bullied from a cliche young master, and takes revenge so fast you quickly realize that everyone is super weak. How strong is the main character? Who knows. However, my least favorite characters are the MC's mother and the ice primordial brave. Okay, MC's mother was the ex-girlfriend of ice brave, and despite the ice brave offering MC's mother help, she declined every time. Because of her constantly denying help, the MC was forced to live in poverty, being tortured both physically and mentally every single day. This pisses me off on another level. Alright, let me just give some backstory before I talk more about the ice brave. Main character is paranoid because of constantly being betrayed, and has trust issues. For some reason, the ice brave literally admits to manipulating her emotions using her power to get close to the main character. The main character, upon hearing this, literally doesn't even care? Is the whole paranoid/trust issues thing just for giggles? The fuck? World background is finicky at best. Many things don't make much sense, and aren't explained that well. I have no idea if this is a post-apocalyptic world, or a technologically advanced world. The author has described it being both. It barely feels like a technologically advanced world due to it lacking anything technologically advanced. Power scaling in this novel straight up sucks. The main character evaluates her power at a C-rank dungeon runner. (Goes from F - S) Not too long after this, she kills a bunch of guards/assassins of a few major families and leaves them defenseless? Can any C-rank dungeon runner do this? If so, the whole plot falls apart before it even started. Overall, this novel is extremely inconsistent. There is a severe lack of explanations in a lot of things, causing the world background to seem very poor. This also causes the pacing to be extremely fast. Many things don't make sense, and the characters are rather poor.

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