Review Detail of Xyves in Card Apprentice Daily Log

The Writing Quality is okay, i have seen WAY worse but also better. The Story's Progress is all over the Place. Sometimes its rushing stuff and other times it's just dropping random knowledge to fill 2 or 3 chapters in. There are quite a few things that get explained with ridiculous reasons or no reasons at all. The Character of the Main Char jumps between 2 or 3 different "Personalitys" and the Story has no Concept for Time at all.