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Review Detail of Lagash in Card Apprentice Daily Log

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Lagash
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There is way too much filler of over explaining and rewriting scenes that already happened. Also too many characters points of view makes it disjointed. Having so many side character side stories when the MC hasnt even done anything yet is just stretching chapters out and not progressing the story.

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