Review Detail of Camoblast in Card Apprentice Daily Log

This story has a great plot that starts pretty good. The main character is interesting and fun to read about. The plot is intriguing with good background info and lots of details. That however is also the issue. There is so much detail that a single conversation with an irrelevant character irrelevant to the actual plot will take several chapters. Most recently the MC had a conversation about a deal that lasted around 10 chapters that easily could have been summed up in a few paragraphs. while this story had started out great, it unfortunately evolved into a money hungry author that will do anything to stretch what little content he has as far as he can, delaying the story progression for weeks if not months at a time.