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spartacus34
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This story has a lot of potential but there is way too much information. -In the first 50 chapters we talk to MC about university but 800 chapters later mc still hasn't entered university and is still doing the same thing. -In 800 chapters, barely a month has passed in the story, must stop abuse. The author really needs to improve the flow of time in the story. Another example is the fight which lasts almost 20 chapters that it becomes boring.

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knnthf
knnthfLv14knnthf

I agree. Remember the fight between Corey? Hell! 30-40 chapters with that fight alone!! That's 10% of the book that time

nerdSupreme14
nerdSupreme14Lv15nerdSupreme14

This was really good to know, thanks for the heads up, I’m going to drop at 305