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Review Detail of KarmaKalo in Card Apprentice Daily Log

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KarmaKalo
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This novel has all the ingredients and parts to be phenomenal but it feels like they get wasted. I’ve read till chapter 100 and I would say over half of the chapters consist of unnecessary dialogue between side and background characters. They mainly talk about their schemes and own plans so much you forget about the mc because there is little focus on him. You think this is a story that focuses on the mc and card creation but you’d be wrong. It is about background schemes and background characters. I guess some people may enjoy it and consider it to be world building or fleshing out characters but to me it doesn’t add anything since I want to focus on the mc and their journey. He has not even gotten stronger since the first couple chapters. Not to mention the schemes that surround the mc, which he has no idea about. I’m no closer to knowing who this circle is or why everyone is so focused on killing and bankrupting the mc.

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Eugene_Zuev
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Yeah so much noise chapters. sometimes mc behave stupid to, I’ve read about 50 chapters, and we have so little about mc his actions but we have so much chapters about nothing, so frustrated dropped here.