Review Detail of blueLipid in Card Apprentice Daily Log

I like the concept of the story, but it’s become difficult to read. - Punctuation and grammatical errors are common, and the writing style overall can sometimes be confusing. - The story gradually becomes so convoluted with various conspiracies that it takes away from them individually. Also, the MC monologues internally about society too often and for too long; it gets boring and repetitive fast. - This is just a personal preference thing, but too many of the characters are terrible people. I’m convinced at this point that 80% of the people in the city are just sociopaths. Too often, their reasoning for treating others like metaphorical and literal punching bags is just because they can.