Review Detail of Once_Upon_A_Time in Livestream: The Adjudicator of Death
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The idea of the story is great and all, but the 4 chapters doesn't work and it's kind of weird. You just get straight into the story about death and there isn't much world building or MC character background (maybe present in later chapters). Four chapters isn't enough to give readers a background of the story and garner interest. All four chapters are just depicting the execution a wealthy scum who escaped from the law. I have to say this again, kind of weird. The impression given was that the rest of the story was just going to be like this, execution scenes. Not to be offensive, but it's kind of sick, honestly, not very appetizing or happy to read about. I don't recommend people to read this story. (This review is based off of the first four chapters given)
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I already written a disclaimer that this review was based on four chapters. It wasn't like there were anything more at the time. How can I fully determine the premise and style? I can only make do with what I had and what was given. How could I have known whether or not more chapters would come out at a later date and that the book wouldn't become like the rest of the dead books?
Space_Fox:you don't reccomend the novel based on 4 chapters.. This is not to to judge if the novel is good, but if the premise and style is interesting
Once_Upon_A_Time:I already written a disclaimer that this review was based on four chapters. It wasn't like there were anything more at the time. How can I fully determine the premise and style? I can only make do with what I had and what was given. How could I have known whether or not more chapters would come out at a later date and that the book wouldn't become like the rest of the dead books?
I'm pretty sure it is different though. Based on my limited knowledge of Saw, it should be the trapping of participants who play a game of death to escape, I don't think the participants have huge crimes pinned on them and I think they actually had a chance to escape while this novel is just pure death. However, based on what I have read, it does seem somewhat similar.
Domn:Yeah there is a movie called saw have a similar idea
Not really? I think Saw was about condemning people who have committed sins. The funny thing about Saw is that you at first don't know what the people have comitted. It gets revealed slowly. Anyways, if you want to read more but don't wanna pay, you can read it in Boxn*vel.com. It has all chapters except the privileged ones. Also, yes I'm censoring because it seems Webnovel censors the whole word of Boxnovel. I really like it, it's very interesting
Once_Upon_A_Time:I'm pretty sure it is different though. Based on my limited knowledge of Saw, it should be the trapping of participants who play a game of death to escape, I don't think the participants have huge crimes pinned on them and I think they actually had a chance to escape while this novel is just pure death. However, based on what I have read, it does seem somewhat similar.
FangZheNi:Only few chapters to free readđ . I'm sorry it's a nice novel but so poorđđđđ
NamelessDandelion:Not really? I think Saw was about condemning people who have committed sins. The funny thing about Saw is that you at first don't know what the people have comitted. It gets revealed slowly. Anyways, if you want to read more but don't wanna pay, you can read it in Boxn*vel.com. It has all chapters except the privileged ones. Also, yes I'm censoring because it seems Webnovel censors the whole word of Boxnovel. I really like it, it's very interesting
NamelessDandelion:Not really? I think Saw was about condemning people who have committed sins. The funny thing about Saw is that you at first don't know what the people have comitted. It gets revealed slowly. Anyways, if you want to read more but don't wanna pay, you can read it in Boxn*vel.com. It has all chapters except the privileged ones. Also, yes I'm censoring because it seems Webnovel censors the whole word of Boxnovel. I really like it, it's very interesting