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Review Detail of Luffy_For_The_Win in Lord of Pets

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I like what was happening so far in the story. However the author fails to explain some of the characters most important choices. Like when he got the monkey. Having a great ape is not every man’s dream. That choice is literally following his failed attempt at getting the op plant. Why go for the less rare and simple ape???!?? No Sense???!??! Doesn’t follow his original attempts either. Makes no sense and there are jumps in logic throughout. Otherwise, it’s ok novel for this sites standards

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Lord of Pets

Black Pepper Immortal

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