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First chapter was interesting start, unfortunately after that things went downhill fast. Mc's magic is just totally different from HP magic, basically he just needs to wish for something to happen, and magic will make it so. He is expert legimens and occlymens in third chapter, all with zero knowledge on how to train them, and really any wizarding knowledge at all. Then chapter later he's casting wandless expecto protonum, again, with zero training on magic and the spell. Which is advanced spell. Essentially, he's recreating magic from absolute scratch with zero magical education, magic and knowledge that took thousands of years to develop with whole magical community participating. Overall, huge disappointment. Mc is closer to god that a wizard. When I first started to read this, I was pleased to see there was no wishes or cheats, but it's actually wish novel, mc just needs to wish for knowledge on how to do magic and it will appear in his head. Besides this is just amgical knowledge, he's also martial arts genius beating adults as small kid and building business empire too. All in couple years. And knowing books and movies just does not give you any actual knowledge on how to do magic.

Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

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