Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

The story started off good. Expanding the potter universe greatly. the MC is outgoing and intelligent but he seemed to deviate off the plot to do side missions endlessly. Playing passive, claiming it was to protect his family, he mostly goes through the same hesitant motions when interacting with the Golden trio or major plot over and over again. Its so repetitive that its gotten old and stale. The author uses deception to keep you guessing about love interests, friends, and enemies. You could erase 80% of the story and you'd basically have the original plot with a smarter Harry and his sister. Its sad to see such a story go to waste. But the author wanted to be different so badly he ended up with this. hey at least some folk enjoyed it. I Suspect the final bad guy to be his wand he seems so terrified of. lololol