Review Detail of gotnerfed in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

The narration is good but i get confused sometimes, ffs are for satisfaction of a writer and readers (who can't put imagination into words) of course this 5, I can't feel Quinn—that's quite a problem for me i can't grasp him —his character, when im reading there's a barrier when I'm trying to reach him and get a grip of his character unlike with Eddie, and i did get a grip on him in dolores arc, just a bit. You researched a lot that's all i can say (lol), u have a good grasp in settings so 5. P.s. Just work on how you deliver the MC's character, don't make him/her too passive. Pps. Just my own opinion that was based of my own preferences.