gotnerfed
I'm here for fanfictions. The more i write in drafts, the more I realize that I'm better off as a book editor. 🥺👾
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Well, if u don't like harem then don't. If u want keep sane just love. If u don't want to be disappointed then don't. If u want a nicely executed "harem" go read it. Im dropping this. Ivy just stress me. P.S. Try to love Ivy at the very beginning, so u won't be full of some emotions that can make rile up in the comment section.
- gotnerfed2yrPosted
The narration is good but i get confused sometimes, ffs are for satisfaction of a writer and readers (who can't put imagination into words) of course this 5, I can't feel Quinn—that's quite a problem for me i can't grasp him —his character, when im reading there's a barrier when I'm trying to reach him and get a grip of his character unlike with Eddie, and i did get a grip on him in dolores arc, just a bit. You researched a lot that's all i can say (lol), u have a good grasp in settings so 5. P.s. Just work on how you deliver the MC's character, don't make him/her too passive. Pps. Just my own opinion that was based of my own preferences.
- gotnerfed2yrCommented
I hate her, just disappear, ivy.
"Quinn!" Ivy exclaimed. This was spiralling out of control. Decisions like this were to be made with the agreement of the group. - gotnerfed2yrReplied to ThePrsn
Hail daphne x quinn!!
. . .It wasn't to be. - gotnerfed2yrCommented
I'm irritated to fleur, she's a flirt—and i don't like 'em, lol.
Quinn felt the weight of Recon in his pockets that were charmed to be weightless. The thoughts of a blonde flashed through his mind, but he put those aside. Fleur needed his help, and it was easy enough for him to provide. - gotnerfed2yrCommented
According to a twelve years old (or 13)
Aomine: 'Who would have thought that he is Satsuki's new neighbor, I should go and talk to him. No guy who plays basketball can be a bad guy.' - gotnerfed2yrCommented"May the stars be with you, challenger," said Firenze and he walked away.
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That's why we get shot when we're still a babe
Tetani Nervum had been inspired by the well-known disease Tetanus. Tetanus is a bacterial infection characterized by muscle spasms that could range anywhere from light tremors to spasms severe enough to fracture bones. Other symptoms of Tetanus included fever, sweating, headaches, trouble swallowing, high blood pressure, and a fast heart rate. But for his spell, Quinn had focused on the spasms that tortured the infected. - gotnerfed2yrCommented
Use ur hanky mappy
But, if it was not a faculty member, which meant it was a student. And if the intruder was indeed a student, then they didn't know what was good for them. Cause there was a f***ing storm going to rain down on their bloody heads. - gotnerfed2yrCommented
It's like calm before the storm lol
But, even with his calm, Quinn didn't question his behavior this entire school year. He didn't even think that something was wrong with his behavior. To him, his year had been like a fun rollercoaster, but nothing wrong. - gotnerfed2yrCommented
When u remembered, u're reincarnated as a british—fancy curses lol.
"Fu-, motherfu-, shit, bloody hell, Merlin's saggy balls I forgot about that," heaved Quinn, his face all scrunched up in pain, clutching his hand and jumping up and down. There was a charm on the door handle that shocked anyone who touched it. - gotnerfed2yrCommented
You really need some punctuation
I was excited Cassie was excited my parents where excited the gnomes where excited I'm taking them with me they need a new battleground I've decided the castle and the Forbidden Forest shall be their proving grounds. - gotnerfed2yrCommented
Honestly, i prefer to be older than harry if I'll be in that world, just my preference.
I plan to save as many people as I can especially the twins. I don't want to pull too much shit cause of the butterfly effect and I know if I talk to dumbles that justice bastard will do everything to meddle. God knows he has to have his nose in everything he's a good man but shit he's way to light. - gotnerfed2yrCommented
No no no, even i like one piece but no! It's the most dangerous world to be in (me after reading detailed, kinda dark one piece ffXD)
Inwardly I'm screaming and shouting with joy. I'm about to blow up with excitement this is something great. Hundreds of world's are running though my head like Naruto or bleach maybe a cultivation world or dxd, ooooh. How about one piece?