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This is a pretty good read in comparison to other fan frictions but gets very slow and boring after first 45-50 chapters. Especially with the same oversmart and all knowing mc who use 'huh' every 3 dialogues. Story is pretty much the same as the original with just some changes and added extra characters (including mc ofc). Also author has a maid fetish...don't get me wrong it's good & all and who doesn't need maids but - with every single FL being a maid? that's just weird imo and as I said, an author's fetish maybe. Grammar is okayish, there are alot of mistakes here and there but bearable. And this novel only has 5 star reviews so maybe this is going to be deleted too.

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Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler

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For the maid, I mean, it a fan-fic, why not right?