It's an alright story. It adds nothing to the table, but it's also not bad. The story is quite boring at times due to how slow it is, but it does make sense since it's a slice of life. There's a lot of filler or useless stuff that happens. 100 chapters could become 40–50 chapters if removing the fillers and bad povs. Also, character interaction are quite awkward since it feels like robots talking to each other. The way the disciples talk to the mc(their master) doesn't feel like they are talking to their master. It's doesn't have the respect, admiration, and reverence one should have for their master. Characters are also very 2-dimensional. Despite me nick picking the novel, there are some good stuff about the novel. The system isn't too op and isn't too useless. The mc still cultivates, even seeing how the system can just give him cultivation realms for teaching his disciples. The mc isn't dumb and thinks rationally. There's no face slapping and "how dare you" or "trash" dialogues repeated every interaction. There's also no audience from the sidelines, always awing over or booing over the mc. All in all, the novel seems to dodge the bad parts of Chinese tropes pretty well which is already excellent, but I wish there was something more interesting or a twist added.
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