Review Detail of Chiyo_Kobayashi in ODIUM

The story is great, unique its own right. My only genuine gripe about it is the writer's upload schedule. Like wtf? I need more! A little tip as well: try breaking your paragraphs for a more visually appealing sight for your readers. Also, I encourage you to do periodic proof readings of your work. It could be every volume, every 50+ chapters or whatever schedule type that fits you, because I detected a few typos here and there. Overall, it's a pretty decent read. Highly recommend[img=recommend]