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"Itai" means "It hurts" in Japanese[img=recommend]
Early review! This really is a breath of fresh air. There's not much to say since there isn't enough chapters to really give my overall thoughts, but for now, I just know this would be a superb story. It has this poetic feel to it with a mixture of something that just lure me into the plot. Great work, and keep writing![img=strong]
The story is great, unique its own right. My only genuine gripe about it is the writer's upload schedule. Like wtf? I need more! A little tip as well: try breaking your paragraphs for a more visually appealing sight for your readers. Also, I encourage you to do periodic proof readings of your work. It could be every volume, every 50+ chapters or whatever schedule type that fits you, because I detected a few typos here and there. Overall, it's a pretty decent read. Highly recommend[img=recommend]
I came into this novel with high expectations based off the reviews it got, and it did not disappoint. Right off the first chapter, I just kept going and going and going til I hit the paywalled chapter. This is my early review, and I'm here to tell you that you won't be disappointed. Kudos, author. Love this work so much![img=recommend]
By the pure penmanship alone, you can tell the experience this man must have conjured all these time. I have no complaints whatsoever. Is it the storyline, character development or the overall pacing? Everything's just a chef's kiss. This is an amazing novel thus far, and I highly recommend it. Keep it up!
Nah, the author cooked in this one right here. It has been a hot minute since I've seen a story that has made me cry and shriek for joy at the exact same period of time. Your storytelling, the way you work your magic with your pen is godly by all means. I love how this story is going. Can't wait to see how this story unfolds. Keep up the good work![img=update]
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