Review Detail of HeavnlyImmortal in I Have the Alchemy Emperor in My Head

Yo, you should read my novel. I'm not gonna lie, I'm just trying to spit in the author's face. Time to take in your criticisms: -most of the main parts will stay intact -mc will not show off stupidly -mc gets... nerfed cheat? you'll see -there will be other nationalities that are major players -i think i've elaborated on how the power system works better, but thats personal opinion... Anyways, check it out or smth. https://www.webnovel.com/book/i-have-the-alchemy-emperor's-inheritance_26164933506488105