Review Detail of yu_chan_desu in Under Her Skin
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the story is wonderfully written and i could sense that the author wants to convey deep emotions towards her readers. personally i loved the story and so far my only comment is that the narration is kind of confusing at the start and the first chapter is very important to attract possible collections and subs. so far a good read. good job author!
Under Her Skin
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Aw! Thank you so much for your suggestions! I'm so happy you're enjoying the novel so far! And you definitely made a valid point about the narration. I tried to make the first chapter filled with action, so I understand that it may have been confusing. I don't think I switched perspective though. I meant for it to be first person all along! Anyway, thank you so much again for taking the time to review this book! I really really appreciate it!!! I hope you have a wonderful day! And continue to read Under Her Skin!