Review Detail of flvssie in Harry Potter: New World

Item: Harry Potter: New World
Rating: 2.8

Review detail

flvssieLv133yrflvssie

This book started out okay in the first two chapters, but afterwards it feels like the author stopped caring about proper grammar and English. If this had been everything I might’ve tried to keep reading, but so many explanations and chapters were either rushed or unintelligible to the point where I couldn’t understand what I was reading. The book has a good concept, but I think it needs a major overhaul before I’d give it another chance.

Harry Potter: New World

HPMan

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Replies5

BarnacleboyLv15Barnacleboy

The authors first language is not english. Its stated on the first chapte…. Just sayin

2yr

NiceReviewerLv4NiceReviewer

So? What is your point? His point still stands. This is borderline not readable.

Barnacleboy:The authors first language is not english. Its stated on the first chapte…. Just sayin

2yr

Mr_BabblesLv15Mr_Babbles

that's not an excuse, get a proofreader or something

Barnacleboy:The authors first language is not english. Its stated on the first chapte…. Just sayin

2yr

death_frost2345Lv4death_frost2345

totally readable just uses too much vocablary(is it just me or you just forget how to spell certain words sometimes?)

2yr

JikoxChatGptLv4JikoxChatGpt

its readable but i still dont get the context at all, its make my head hurt

death_frost2345:totally readable just uses too much vocablary(is it just me or you just forget how to spell certain words sometimes?)

2yr