Review Detail of TaintedMetal in THE TRA GRADE S

Right, it took me a while to read and carefully analyze everything in order for this review to take place. There is a lot to take in as you read. The book is very rich with detail, so much detail that you would have to be very patient as you read along. Several scenes are intriguing of course, each of them having a mini mystery of some sorts. The only thing I think needs some work is the amount of giant paragraphs. There is a lot of them. Maybe space out some sentences in order to make their words and phrases more impactful, easier to read and to an extent, powerful: make a statement. But so far so good author, keep up the good work.