Review Detail of Clockhours in A Possessive Mafia Leader

It's a fast paced story and I like it. The background of every character is well written. The world background is a believable one. Now, in my opinion, you should try different words for different characters dialogue. Like in 1st chapter I found different characters saying the the same words like okay, sure etc. You are writing it in the First person POV and it's a little confusing when, other than the main character's perspective is mentioned as I feel that you are transitioning very fast from character to character. Overall, it's a great read.