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It is a good novel. However , i got bored of the novel quickly because of the imbalance in pacing of the novel. The hero levels up quickly till level 42. And then booom..... There is no more progression for the the next 100 chapters. I understand that the author did this to describe the world building. However the author could have mixed levels ups and world building together so that readers would not get bored because of the stalemate in power progression. The MC could have built his kingdom while raising his power at the same time. There is no adrenaline inducing scenes ( fighting/ romantic ) during these hundreds of chapters which makes it seem boring. If the author feels the need to prolong his novel, he could have introduced power levels beyond level 100 . He can introduce new more powerful villains with higher power levels ( or infact new world's to explore) rather than slowing down the pace of the novel. You can introduce rebellions, traitors, new technologies , more lands to explore, more romantic interests more species ........The possibilities are endless. If the MC takes 100 chapters to level up once from level 42 to 43, I can't imagine the number of chapters required for the MC to reach level 100. I stopped reading because of it. I will come back to check it out later to see if the author incorporates these changes

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