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Frozentech
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The story is getting worse as it progresses. MC is supposed to be an expert in VR games but he makes so many stupid mistakes... MC knows death is not permanent but doesn't kill his opponent right away... MC likes to play around with his opponent. The other players have a lot of those life-saving items... Items that are supposed to be rare are everywhere. They all have life-sacrifice items and always wear rebirth amulets. Which are supposed to be expensive but they still have them all the time. In the tutorial period, the MC was still very cautious and he doesn't put himself in situations he cants get out of. But after that, he became a dumb wimpy character and is an easygoing type of character. The character shift was so fast. Again MC is supposed to be a veteran gamer but acts like a noob. He doesn't even know how to check his stats or his inventory properly. If the fairy is not there is probably died so many times already. Author please pick an ache type and stick with it. It the MC is an expert then let him act like one. It's like he lost all of his gaming sense after he got sucked into the game.

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Nicholas_Emmett
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I can kind of see that, but who says a good gamer also doesn't get surprised and does idiotic things. The MC in many instances is getting overwhelmed by a lot of things that are time sensitive. A pro gamer gets exhausted while gaming, now imagine being stuck in one, not only that but the stakes are way higher and you got other people that are going to be just better than him and you got to dumb him down a little and let others shine. it's okay to have the MC step back or preoccupied as well. the writing and flow of the story could definitely be better, but no need to question or take shots at the author's choices for the story and the MC, let em do his thing.if you actually want to help suggest ideas of situations that you'd love to see certain characters in."I'd love to read more about "Masters" experiences even if they recap a little.one thing I actually enjoy a lot in stories is when they break off into different perspectives or jump locations and characters.