I can kind of see that, but who says a good gamer also doesn't get surprised and does idiotic things. The MC in many instances is getting overwhelmed by a lot of things that are time sensitive. A pro gamer gets exhausted while gaming, now imagine being stuck in one, not only that but the stakes are way higher and you got other people that are going to be just better than him and you got to dumb him down a little and let others shine. it's okay to have the MC step back or preoccupied as well. the writing and flow of the story could definitely be better, but no need to question or take shots at the author's choices for the story and the MC, let em do his thing.if you actually want to help suggest ideas of situations that you'd love to see certain characters in."I'd love to read more about "Masters" experiences even if they recap a little.one thing I actually enjoy a lot in stories is when they break off into different perspectives or jump locations and characters.

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i feel like there are some parts that get a little weak or rushed, but to be honest I feel like it's when the MC is also in a rushed situation. a lot of the arcs are cool and quite different then some of the other fantasy game web novels I've read. -your comment isn't helpful, you suck at feedback, comment about a specific arc, idk, grow a pair.

@unrivaledarcaner, sorry i didn't put my comments in the right order-if you look at the previous review by herman_PretoriusI put a question in there about how it might be possible to purchase or receive access to printed volumes or arcs of the story? let me know, and thank you for the story.

hi, I had a question for you about Second World, I'm wondering if we can purchase printable pdf volumes or collections of pages? your web novel is actually one of the few that is well written and easy to read in English, I enjoy reading it a lot.either way thank you for the story.i have ideas of what's going to happen or I sometimes pick up on your about the foreshadowing of the "main quest line" but I still don't know how things are going to tie in and how it'll all unfold and I like it enough to want to have my own printed version. let me know what you think.

I think the MC has always been a moron but with really good survival instincts.i like how he isn't a know it all or becoming omniscient. it's actually really annoying in some other stories where like every MC feels like they are pushed into becoming God.just because their "stats" increase.

amen

i was kind of surprised by the first reviews and comments i read. i do get what they are saying but the reviews saying the character is a moron and they are critical of unrivaledarcaners- those reviews are pretty shallow.