Review Detail of Trafford in WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION

Warlock of the Magus world is a very good novel, that didn't have many negative points. There are only several ones. First is the neglected Clan Building element that was created when Leylin became Rank 5 Magus approximately, afterward it was a little bit talked about when he became Half-Step Rank 7, but that is all. The second thing that was neglected in the story was planar exploration and conquest. This one had great potential but wasn't developed properly, compared to another novel similar to WMW, Mechanical God Emperor, you could use more planar exploration and planar wars. The third thing that was forgotten was an exploration of the Underground World of the Magus World. Leylin told he would once explore it, but it never happened. Forth novel started to have a kingdom-building element but wasn't also written properly.