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Review Detail of Kiyoung in The Conquerors Path

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Kiyoung
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A novel with a good base story and good potential ruined by bad grammar and sentence formation and also a lot of typos. I'm at the start of the novel so can't say for the later chapters but the starting chapters are really bad. Hope it gets better later.

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The Conquerors Path

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PRIMORDIAL_SAINT
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Don't you think it would be better to wait and read more chapters and get the gist of the story rather than giving it a bad rating straight away😒😒.

Kiyoung
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Well I couldn't get past the first 10-15 chapters, the grammar made it a bit hard to read and the story also got a bit stale for me, maybe cause of the writing style(idk). If I ever continue I'll update the review

PRIMORDIAL_SAINT:Don't you think it would be better to wait and read more chapters and get the gist of the story rather than giving it a bad rating straight away😒😒.
CrispyFrenemy37
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Well, what an ugly review then days I mean there are only 15 chapters that you read at least you would have read 30 and that after 30 improves your grammar and above it is not so bad if you have reading comprehension

Kiyoung:Well I couldn't get past the first 10-15 chapters, the grammar made it a bit hard to read and the story also got a bit stale for me, maybe cause of the writing style(idk). If I ever continue I'll update the review
Ouroboros001
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No, you're both wrong. He's right and right to review it as such. I thank you for saving me the time of finding this out myself. It's not hard to proofread and edit. Some fans even help writers for free. There's really no excuse. FYI? Most people will just read five to ten chapters before they decide to drop any series. That's a lot of chapters to f*** up. 😆 I mean usually the real problem on web series hosting sites like this one is overall quality assurance over time. I.e. You read something good at first and then sometime after premium on here usually the quality plummets. Not to talk about dropped projects and such. And on this platform some of the ratings directly link to to syntax and spelling too. As well as style, prose, and such if you think about it? If it's so bad he felt he had to take time out of his day to make a review for it after 10-15 chapters because it was just that bad? Honestly... Sigh. I think then that it would deserve a much worse rating then this. I have come to see that people like you guys, ones that attack constructive criticism reviews like this that are genuinely helpful to perspective readers, seem to almost have like a Stockholm syndrome to these authors even when the writing is objectively bad on here for many series that are aledgedly popular. Don't people like you remember your English literature classes? Or did you not go to high-school or college? You should know what a minimum quality level is... A reading level grade for books. You did AR in school you should know. 😆

CrispyFrenemy37:Well, what an ugly review then days I mean there are only 15 chapters that you read at least you would have read 30 and that after 30 improves your grammar and above it is not so bad if you have reading comprehension
Ouroboros001
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