This book is very much to my liking. The mc is tactful, patient, and less outstanding. The pace also just right, not too slow and not too fast. I hope the author can write this novel until the end.
Mysterious_Pen
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LIKEno harem? wth! 2-3 beautiful girls are okay but having a power and strength without girls means nothing and boring...
Mysterious_Pen:no harem
yup a novel with the same title and system came on pilot read last month or something,I don't remember only after author signed the contract did it come so what do u think of was copy book
MrFalan:Just looked it up its a Novel with same title on mtl
hi , i think that the story line is pretty good but one of your biggest hurdles is the language. i don't know if right you got better at writing but in the first chapter there are a lot of mistakes . if you think you ve improved language wise you should probably edit them .
Mysterious_Pen:Thanks for your review, please support this book :D
How is that boring đ. I find novels with 2-3+ beautiful useless girls just surrounding the mc boring
Kentaro_Ken_6052:no harem? wth! 2-3 beautiful girls are okay but having a power and strength without girls means nothing and boring...
Your pfp is adorable, if there wasnt a border i wouldve saved the photo of it. its so fluff and chonk and angy, so cute. also rare to see a mod, how you doing hot stuff, wanna suggest a novel, rawr, talk later kay~ mwuah~~~
Delther:yup a novel with the same title and system came on pilot read last month or something,I don't remember only after author signed the contract did it come so what do u think of was copy book
Kentaro_Ken_6052:no harem? wth! 2-3 beautiful girls are okay but having a power and strength without girls means nothing and boring...