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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen1yr
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    Thank you. Your criticism and suggestions mean a lot to me. I think I should add more fight scenes in the future...

    Ch 169 Taming Treasure Seeking Mouse
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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen1yr
    Replied to Roll_No_2

    Thank you for reminder~

    Ch 152 Demaged Spirit Artifact
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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen1yr
    Replied to Nezha_777

    Thank you~

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    Mysterious_Pen1yr
    Replied to Roll_No_2

    haha forgot

    Ch 145 Divine Artifact Building
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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen1yr
    Replied to dsam39

    Right, I corrected many mistakes that readers mention in the comment paragraphs. Thank you for the reminder, I'll mention it in the next free chapter.

    Ch 140 Mysterious Formation
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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen1yr
    Replied to Granville4554

    Right. I usually read the chapter two or three times to make sure there are mistakes, but lately, I haven't done that haha. But I make sure to correct mistakes if readers mention them in the comment paragraphs.

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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen1yr
    Replied to Granville4554

    about what?

    Ch 140 Mysterious Formation
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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen2yr
    Replied to Monalishingun

    Chapter 113

    Perhaps this smooth advancement was greatly influenced by his high aptitude.
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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen2yr
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    I've been settled on my new job, so hopefully I can update regularly now~

    Ch 126 The Mysterious Collector
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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen2yr
    Replied to Thee_AngryBird

    Not dropping, I'm just too busy with work lately. Thank for reading my novel~

    Ch 123 Foundation Establishment Realm
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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen2yr
    Replied to MagicSand

    It's my mistake. Thankss~

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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen2yr
    Replied to dsam39

    Thanks by the way. It's kinda bad habit of mine haha. I like you comments so decided to edit some parts of the chapter silently.

    Ch 112 The Unlucky Egg Was Struck By Lightning
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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen2yr
    Replied to its_L

    no

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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen2yr
    Replied to DeusaderVulting

    Thanks for advise...

    Ch 110 I Want Him
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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen2yr
    Replied to DeusaderVulting

    Thanks for the reminder. While that looks like an info dump, it actually relates to the next few chapters. :)

    Ch 108 The Ten Great Sects
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    Mysterious_Pen2yr
    Replied to wrong_name

    thankss

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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen2yr
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    Writing Quality: 4 Stars The Author personally thinks that the writing quality is decent. However, the grammar is a bit meh... English is not the Author's first language. He had never mingled with the English-speaking community before, and he had very little time to take English lessons since language was not his major. The Author could do this well thanks to his experience reading many English translation novels. The way the Author wrote the ICEE is a bit troublesome. First, he wrote it with own language and then translated it with Google Translation. Finally, he edited it using Grammarly. So, please understand if the writing quality is not very good. Stability of Update: 2 Stars Writing novels is Author's hobby and side job. Meanwhile, he still has his job. Therefore, the stability of the update is not guaranteed and satisfactory. However, he still strives to write whenever free to satisfy his dear readers' curiosity. Story Development: 5 Stars The pace of the story is relatively slow. However, it was steady. The development of the main character's strength is also a little slow due to his cautious nature. However, it would progress rapidly once he discovered a cultivation technique to conceal his cultivation base. Besides, the main character also still has many things that he must upgrade using his Cultivation Points besides his cultivation base. Although increasing the cultivation base is essential, improving other aspects is no less important. Character Design: 5 Stars The main character made by the Author is humble, cautious, and steady. However, he is definitely not a soft persimmon. The Author doesn't intend to make the main character low-key. He just wants to make the main character no different from other relatively talented sect's disciples. Still, he is a protagonist, after all. No matter how ordinary he was, he still had some aspect that made him stand up among the people. Apart from the main character, there are also some interesting side characters and some cheap enemies. For more information, you can read it yourself... World Background: 5 Stars The Author said, "It was good... I think."

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  • Mysterious_Pen
    Mysterious_Pen2yr
    Replied to Resident_Daoist

    There's no Odorless Bean, Qin Yi just misremembered its name.

    Grand Master Du sighed and explained, "This bean is indeed odorless, but it's not called Odorless Bean but Notorious Bean. This ingredient is called Notorious Bean because its odor characteristics can change after it is made into a product called Beast Avoiding Powder."
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    Mysterious_Pen2yr
    Replied to heavenlyundead

    The previous chapter got revised, I'm sorry for this inconvenience, please re-read again.

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    Mysterious_Pen2yr
    Replied to Roaring_Snake

    The previous chapter got revised, I'm sorry for this inconvenience, please re-read again.

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