Review Detail of amaturewriter in Chronicles of a Nobody

3 stars for mass release and kudos for you to converting the ATG PL to naruto. -No CD, theres no character development what so ever in you story, Your MC just trains and talks with system, no interaction between characters other than talking here and there and suddenly in C15 he pissed ad his gramps condition. there was barely any interaction between em before. And above all the MC is bland and has no real purpose, just does shit for the sake of it. -No exploration or addition of new things, not even characters. You got an entire village and people but none of it is explored [ as of C15]. And after c15 he meets and talks but its just bland, training, MC showing jutsu with no training, gramps going oh thats my grandson and acting like its nothing? its OOC, no hint of a war veteran or a leader who is in war times, rather some peaceful old man who dosnt care. This is was stupid, they are in turbulent times and the old man accepts this shit? -And you did mention new mountain range/place but thats all, no exploration of it. You should've explored the working of kumo, -Plus the starting chps were all system and jargon whist the rest are just training, info, or something like that. moments of MC getting stronger, no actual story or plot. honestly feels like a training manual listing what someone did to get stronger. And then theres the power. you've introduced ATG thing but other than the PL and body and veins, its all naruto and other world shit like demon slayer or observation haki. you've failed at using/exploring the ATG power in naruto. And not sure if you know this, even with the conversation ATG is a world where the cannon fodders were easy god madara to kaguya [ this is not an exaggeration, ]..it ATG, yun che in his starting moments earth profound could easily lift sword weighing tons, or the budda art that giving pure physical strength that drawfs any and all in naruto verse minus god tiers [ wiki: First Stage - Provides strength of one thousand five hundred kilos. just physical strength. MC already a god by 4th stage and it provide durability ]. All in all its just bland and boring, with barely any CD or WD and the ATG is just useless, as it really serves no purpose, plus just butchers you story cause that verse things are too OP for naruto. The moments mentioned in the story are either MC training or fighting, no actual content or character interactions. [ the one with samui, gramps, or training were just talking about MC doing jutsu ] -- I just removing the training moments and explore the world and character interactions properly