Review Detail of Boilala in Panolethria: Saving the Multiverse

Alright so I guess I'll start with the positives first. •There are no noticable grammatical errors. The author writes cleanly giving a clear description of the characters thoughts in the current situation. •The characters are rather charming so far. The twin sisters relationship is pretty cute and a pretty close depiction of a sibling relationship. (Trust me I have a brother) •The story has constant uploads with no noticable drop in quality so far. Now for the negatives. •Its cliche. You started off with a very interesting hook. A family seeking to demand something from destiny itself. Children trained in various martial arts for the sake of the future. Then destiny isekai them into a game world. The level system is a small bit unique with the fact that you dont necessarily need to kill monsters to level but it still follows the same format as everything else. Of course theres also the adventures guild and a bronze to whatever ranking system. For those that are into this stuff it will be a good read as the author doesnt just rely on the leveling system and big boobs to make the story intersting. •I understand that the sisters are in a new world but I feel like the world isnt really there. When something is described like destiny's incarnate, it's well writin and very interesting but it seems that when describing something irrelevant to the plot the author doesnt place as much care. A shack is a shack and a plain is a plain. Not really a big issue but still one none the less. And this ones just personal note. •Try to be more creative. The twins strength when around each other is interesting. Destiny's incarnate is interesting but the world is dull. Maybe spice things up a bit in future chapters. it's a long one but I hope this was helpful. Feel free to ignore me author senpai:)