bro im sorry but how tf did he get sent down with wulin too? You do know the only reason that wulin was sent down from the divine realm was becuase he was implanted with the golden dragon kings blood right? and the mc doesnt have that so he wouldve been raised by tang san not raised by lan yue and tang ziren... OC teacher also doesnt make sense because 1, clear sky hammer clan doesnt affiliate with the spirit pagoda because they have enmity and 2, do you really think a clear sky elder would be the branch manager of a spirit pagoda building in a tiny city??? It doesnt make any sense..
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LIKEThis is for reviews and that was a review and based on what he said I'd have to agree it doesn't make sense for those things to occur so the only 'quality' I could agree with is the poor quality incorporating the source material (should possibly reread the novel before making a fanfic on it if you do not understand such glaring issues) and your great quality sucking up to defend what simply cannot be defended, if you don't like reviews in both forms, then stay away from the review section.
Gilgamos:If you donât like it donât read it plus it shouldnât matter anyway itâs a quality story