it was cringe

i feel like you may have a brain cell deficit

This novel is simply so cringe that it's hard to read. First of all, the entire novel is ENGLISH YET THE AUTHOR MAKES A CHARACTER SAY "Chotto-Matte" isntead of "Wait a second" for absolutely no reason. It makes no sense, and I know its meant to be "funny" or sosmething but it just isnt, its extremly awkward and hard to read. Now, that isnt even the worst part. The worst part is the author describing a 10 year old girl's chest and how the MC touched it... it's so hard to read... Conclusion: This novel is extremely cringe and hard to read, I don't really like it because its not my style, but some people may like it.

can you add more chapters here so the ddifference with patreon isnt so huge? you only have 7 patreons anyway so pls.. ;-; (u can alsos just update more frequently)

Not only did you use the wrong form of miss but you also said “bozo”, definitely 12 💀

I am convinced you’re 12 years old or something… i cba to argue with you

why does the world government matter? since when do authors have to be dangerous??? Oda created the world Rob is living in right now, Oda created the manga he is sending out, Rob is nothing more than something akin to a translator. (Redraw / Typesetting / Distributing)

didnt expect someone else to understand fome (means boring)

“rob knows he’s stealing” your comment is contradicting itself. If he knows he’s stealing then he isn’t considered an author at all but rather a plagiarist, at best a publisher. Also, does it matter thst no one would know who Oda is? The answer is that it doesn’t. Just because someone isn’t known doesn’t change who made the original.

the “something else” that’s going on is ignorant writing that copies every other chinese novel

his power comes from stars, not the concept of stars

Make the Flying Raijin go from a forbiddeen jutsu into a type of kekkei tota. It's super OP but people think it can only be used for teleportation. For example; with Flying Raijin, you can make a barrier as big as a mountain that teleports anything that touches it (mass teleportation), this can be used to deflect attakcs and block attacks (blocked nine tails bijuudama). Also, its a TIME-space ninjutsu, you can develop time based ninjutsu off of it. (Time cutter, time stop, time slow, speed up, etc.)

This makes no sense, the stars don’t move, they’re still the same distance away. The only change between night and day is the position of our star and the ozone layer. (Also the sun is a star)

It was translated literally, the raw most likely meant "organization", which means he's talking about the Akatsuki. In all honesty, the chinese words in this fan fic dont do anything bad at all, just use context clues and its super easy to figure out...

First time here? Welcome. Anyways, they make a review because they want to know the raw link or MTL for the novel so they can start reading it before Webnovel sends it out, it's pretty common. (This only happens on Trial Reads most of the time, so ratings are still trustworthy if they're out of Trial Reads.)

Also, Obito DOES NOT have a lot of potential. The reason he is so strong is because of Hashirama cells that strengthens his bloodline limit and gives him extreme advantages.

uh the itachi girlfriend thing is canon, Izumi was Itachi’s crush and also the reason he awoke his mangekyou. He killed her on the uchiha massacre night and awoke it. So far only small irrelevant characters have been made up, but almost all of them are canon. (including the anbu and classmates shown so far, i checked)

you are too innocent.

if someone wants to continue it or use the idea, they’re free to do so

it’s not personal and i’m not that big a fan, i review pretty much everything in this format you can just go thru my profile. Also, your story is still good, just not my cup of tea.