Right off the bat is a peculiar man, with a peculiar weapon, stabbing to death someone hahaha and it totally hooked me. Killing someone with a fork, this unexpected murder weapon made me laugh. The start is descriptive and enjoyable, except from the too deep words I had to search up on Google to understand lol (maybe i'm just dumb) but aside from that vocabs, (which i think you should tone down on a bit) i think this would be a great story. Give us more massacre pls ♡_♡
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