Review Detail of TaintedMetal in Should have been better

It's a romance, and it's a recommended read for anyone who enjoys that kind of genre. It's also akin to Korean culture in a way, seeing how there's a lead character from the said country. The story is simple and easy to understand, and the direction is clear from the beginning. However if there's anything I need to criticize, I feel the characters aren't striking at the moment; nobody really stands out but maybe they will in future chapters. One of my biggest criticisms is the grammar and choice of words. I understand what is going on in the story, but the execution needs some work. But so far so good author, keep up the good direction, but try to make your characters stand out more especially in a genre that is common for most readers, and try to take into consideration on your word choices and structure. Certain parts can be spaced out for easier reading and to an extent, greater effect.