Review Detail of ARnab in THE 7TEEN: LET THE PAIN EXIST

Damn the writing style l, quite the unique feature. Although many may suggest you to change it or say something like it's unprofessional I think you shouldn't change it( only my opinion, no to disregard others' ). Thought I think a little bit of work should be put to the expressing of emotions of the characters since you are using a dialogue style of writing, like when the dead bodies are described it's makes the reader (some at least) literally feel disgusted ( i.e, actually very fantastic ) but as of the person who is actually using the dialogues to describe it doesn't feel many emotions ( IMO) so it would be better to express their feelings, expressions and conditions while they are in the middle of conversation. Like while starting the conversation you can try expressing their facial expression and in the middle how it suddenly changes as the situation progresses. The graphic description of the deaths is awfully awesome. Waiting for more chapters.