Review Detail of KN808 in CONQEROR
Review detail
Mediocre and not in the good way. Also how you finna have the book cover with the correct spelling of "conqueror" but have it be wrong as the TITTLE of the book LOL. Now to the actual review. Story: The story is bland, it's nothing new. And even if it was made out to be a rehash/mix-match of all of the other similar "died then reincarnate as a godly abomination with a system", it's still bland. If there was an outline of this genre of a novel, this would sadly be it. With that said it might improve later on, but I would have no ability to know that as it is currently locked after only 18 CHAPTERS. And I would genuinely be surprised if anybody spends even their fast pass let alone god forbid coins on this novel. And as far as characters and interactions between characters go, it sounds and behaves like you would expect of this novel...unrealistic and off-putting. And also oddly demanding as well. I also understand that this "author" is not a fluent English speaker, but with that said, Grammarly is free and he/she would greatly benefit from such a service. All in all, I would not recommend this novel, check it out if you so wish, but I would advise against spending your coins or passes on this novel.
CONQEROR
BLACKangelmarl
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Well... thanks for the review though. As for the chapters I can't really make the chapters free again because it's a contracted novel. I already free some chapters on their website, but the chapters here didn't really become free. As for the tittle tittle, I already said that I can't change it, as you can see the cover is entirely different from the tittle. And as for the interaction, I didn't know what you find with the interaction bad. But, all I can say was the Soldiers and Subordinate were created by the system. And in the subordinates and Soldiers mind was, Fendrel was their king or a god and they will obey any of Fendrel's orders unconditionally. Also this novel focused on kingdom building and conquering. So I didn't think there's that much Kingdom building novel on this website, because I can't really find that many kingdom building on this website. I appreciate your review though.
BLACKangelmarl:Well... thanks for the review though. As for the chapters I can't really make the chapters free again because it's a contracted novel. I already free some chapters on their website, but the chapters here didn't really become free. As for the tittle tittle, I already said that I can't change it, as you can see the cover is entirely different from the tittle. And as for the interaction, I didn't know what you find with the interaction bad. But, all I can say was the Soldiers and Subordinate were created by the system. And in the subordinates and Soldiers mind was, Fendrel was their king or a god and they will obey any of Fendrel's orders unconditionally. Also this novel focused on kingdom building and conquering. So I didn't think there's that much Kingdom building novel on this website, because I can't really find that many kingdom building on this website. I appreciate your review though.
AntiLoliLewding:Aren't you capable of changing the title? I mean, I can do it as well whenever I write.
wait, you don't use inkstone? Oh that makes sense, cuz if you use Inkstone then you can change the name any time.
BLACKangelmarl:On the website I write I can't, it's on sharestory website. I can't also free my chapters again.